Chapter 1 - Sleep [Poem]
Wednesday, October 19, 2011

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Well, since chapter 2 is... kind of pretty far away from finishing. I thought I'll entertain anyone who liked the story so far.


The young man sleeps with a dreadful mind
More than the pain of humanity combined
His lonely protector treads the night
With nothing more than a lone white light
His haunted memories screamed at him
Leave this world and come with me! 
Alas, his protector fought his fright
Without the shining armor of prince or knight
Bravery kills and death returns
The lone protector falls back down to earth
Rotting flesh and a damaged soul
Darkness rejoice with the life they stole
Young man who knew no darkness or pain
Fell to his knees with his face blood stained
Tears fell as he kissed thee lone knight 
Thus rekindled life with morning light


Well, it's been years since I've attempted a poem. So uh. Chill with the critique, bro.

In case you haven't read the story yet, here's the link to it.

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Chapter 1 - Sleep
Monday, October 17, 2011


I had this idea last night right before I went to bed. It's been years since I've written a story like this. I still don't know what kind of title to give this story. But this is the chapter 1. Hopefully there'll be more in the future. I also hope that you'll like it, I don't mind critique as long as it's constructive. It took me quite a few hours to get this out. Warning, this is a little sadistic. So well, without further ado, enjoy.



There was nothing he looked forward to in life. Leo isn't very popular in his school, being a quiet guy, he spends most of his time alone in school, no one knows who he is, no one remembers who he is. At the end of the day, he found himself walking home alone, feeling the loneliness creep into him.

However, Leo's not going to let himself feel depressed today, for it is his 18th birthday, the first step into adulthood. As negative as he may be, he secretly looks forward to the small celebration his family holds for him every year.

As he take the first step into his house, "Happy birthday Leo!" cheered both his parents. Those words sparked a small fire in his heart, lighting up a smile on his face. Being the lone child of the family, his parents try their best to be around his side as much as possible. Even so, the harsh economy forced both his parents to work, leaving him to fend for himself most of the time.

Knowing that, Leo felt immensely loved when both his parents took leave to celebrate his birthday.

Unfortunately, his happiness is short lived.
BAM! Leo heard a loud sound and lost all consciousness.

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